October 20, 2014 (In-class) Reflection

After writing my analysis on the story "A rose for Emily", I realized that it was missing something. I had included a correct thesis statement for the paper, but I also included other thesis' within it as well. In other words, I had trouble making sure that the thesis I had chose was rarely talked about and mentioned above the surface with no depth. Great advice that my instructor gave me was to make sure I ask myself questions like "Am I staying on topic?' and "Is my topic too narrow or too broad"? Once I fixed this problem with my paper, I was able to recognize how a proper analysis should look and be perceived.